我支持讨要说法，但措辞有待改进。对于事实的定义应该更加肯定，不需要用到缓和的语气。但同样没必要强调“该由中国人来下定论”。这种外宣式说辞本身存在逻辑漏洞，容易带偏叙事失去主动，更不利于争取到第三方的共情。这点如果你寻求媒体帮助的话就很重要。
换成是我的话，会这么措辞：
Thank you for your response. Please allow me to clarify, this is not the sort of things that can be settled with some messengers on Instagram. What I looking for is &这里加入自己的核心诉求&
About the song your son sang once in front the Camera. We contacted with many Spanish to go over it, making it highly unlikely for misunderstand, and makes this apology becomes even unacceptable.
The necessity for an apology stems from the harm that Chinese female have already suffered, rather than the song being defined as a joke or an attack. And your son's lie before singing indicate that he was aware of the situation. Therefore, this is racism.
Your son is a brave young man who insult millions of Chinese female in front of the camera and I believe he should be brave enough to show his good side, and perhaps also "how your feel about Chinese people" as you mentioned, which we will appreciate, in the same way.
&这里新开段落强调完整诉求，譬如说来自皇马官方的回应以及本人的回应等&
感谢你的回复。请允许我澄清一下，这不是一件能够经由Ins私聊来解决的事情，我所期待的是...此处加入核心诉求...
为你儿子在镜头前所唱的这首歌，我们找来了不少西班牙人来进行确认，因此其中发生误解的可能性几乎不存在，也因此这一道歉我们无法接受。
道歉的必要性来自于这首歌对中国女性造成伤害的即成事实，而非将这首歌定义为玩笑或是蓄意的攻击。你儿子在唱歌前撒谎的行为，说明了他对于实际情况的了解。所以，这就是种族歧视。
你的儿子是位勇敢的年轻人，在镜头前羞辱了无数中国女性。我相信他应该拿出同样的勇气，在镜头前展示他好的一面，以及你所提及的“你们家族对中国人的感受”，我们将会对此表示欣赏。
...这里新开段落强调自己的完整诉求，再后面的部分相对不那么重要，措辞随意。
我支持讨要说法，但措辞有待改进。对于事实的定义应该更加肯定，不需要用到缓和的语气。但同样没必要强调“该由中国人来下定论”。这种外宣式说辞本身存在逻辑漏洞，容易带偏叙事失去主动，更不利于争取到第三方的共情。这点如果你寻求媒体帮助的话就很重要。
换成是我的话，会这么措辞：
Thank you for your response. Please allow me to clarify, this is not the sort of things that can be settled with some messengers on Instagram. What I looking for is &这里加入自己的核心诉求&
About the song your son sang once in front the Camera. We contacted with many Spanish to go over it, making it highly unlikely for misunderstand, and makes this apology becomes even unacceptable.
The necessity for an apology stems from the harm that Chinese female have already suffered, rather than the song being defined as a joke or an attack. And your son's lie before singing indicate that he was aware of the situation. Therefore, this is racism.
Your son is a brave young man who insult millions of Chinese female in front of the camera and I believe he should be brave enough to show his good side, and perhaps also "how your feel about Chinese people" as you mentioned, which we will appreciate, in the same way.
&这里新开段落强调完整诉求，譬如说来自皇马官方的回应以及本人的回应等&
感谢你的回复。请允许我澄清一下，这不是一件能够经由Ins私聊来解决的事情，我所期待的是...此处加入核心诉求...
为你儿子在镜头前所唱的这首歌，我们找来了不少西班牙人来进行确认，因此其中发生误解的可能性几乎不存在，也因此这一道歉我们无法接受。
道歉的必要性来自于这首歌对中国女性造成伤害的即成事实，而非将这首歌定义为玩笑或是蓄意的攻击。你儿子在唱歌前撒谎的行为，说明了他对于实际情况的了解。所以，这就是种族歧视。
你的儿子是位勇敢的年轻人，在镜头前羞辱了无数中国女性。我相信他应该拿出同样的勇气，在镜头前展示他好的一面，以及你所提及的“你们家族对中国人的感受”，我们将会对此表示欣赏。
...这里新开段落强调自己的完整诉求，再后面的部分相对不那么重要，措辞随意。
